Dear Roger,
Regarding the discussion we had on the plane about a job opportunity in one of your restaurants. To refresh your memory, we were aboard the flighr 6RTS on 25th October 2021 travelling from vancouver to Ontario. The flight took off at 1800 Hours and touched down at 2000 Hours, during which we met and had a conversation.
Turning to the type of job opportunity, I am particularly interested in the managerial position, although a job in HR department would be fine as well.
Now, About my experience, I have 4 years of experience as a Branch Manager and 2 years of know-how as an HR. Furthermore, I am a top level graduate with a degree in Hotel Management. I would like to be considered for a managerial position due to my experience as a manager being higher. As you know, relocating is not a problem for me, as I currently do not have any such responsibilities that weigh me down to settle down at a single place.
Expecting a reply from you soon, If you need any more information do not hesitate to contact me at gaurav.upadhayay@yahoo.com.
Thanking You,
Gaurav Upadhyay
Dear Roger,
Regarding the discussion we had on the plane about a job opportunity in one of your restaurants. To refresh your memory, we were aboard the flight 6RTS on 25th October 2021 travelling from Vancouver to Ontario. The flight took off at 1800 Hours and touched down at 2000 Hours, during which we met and had a conversation.
Turning to the type of job opportunity, I am particularly interested in the managerial position, although a job in HR department would be fine as well.
Now, About my experience, I have 4 years of experience as a Branch Manager and 2 years of know-how as an HR. Furthermore, I am a top level graduate with a degree in Hotel Management. I would like to be considered for a managerial position due to my experience as a manager being higher. As you know, relocating is not a problem for me, as I currently do not have any such responsibilities that weigh me down to settle down at a single place.
Expecting a reply from you soon, If you need any more information do not hesitate to contact me at gaurav.upadhayay@yahoo.com.
Thanking You,
Gaurav Upadhyay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69948186528 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42924555745 2.54303337028 135% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1432277326 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36939498143 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13860095647 0.0766984524023 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195825055095 0.0603063233224 325% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199862612201 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.285591852102 0.0580467560999 492% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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