The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
Writing task 1
The line graph illustrates the cost of world food and oil over an 11 year period from 2000 to 2011. In general, both of the graphs
show
a similar pattern of changes.
Firstly, from 2000 to mid-2008 both world food and oil prices steadily increased from approximately 25 dollars to 120 dollars.
Secondly, from mid-2008 to 2009, there was a dramatic fall in the cost of world food and oil prices.
Finally, from 2009 to 2011, both prices of food and oil dramatically increased.
Interestingly, although the cost of world food and oil was approximately 125 dollars decreased from mid-2008 to 2009, average oil prices
showed
more decrement than world food prices almost by 20 dollars.
Furthermore, from 2009 to 2011, there was a significant balloon in food and oil prices, and in 2011 difference between prices of oil and food was 40 dollars even though in 2000 oil price was slightly higher than food price.
Moreover, from 2000 to 2007, the cost of both world food and oil steadily increased but there was a huge surge in prices from 2007 to mid-2008, indicating a shortage of quantity of food and oil.
To conclude, from 2000 to 2011, both food and oil prices had similar trends but from 2009 and 2011, the cost of oil was lower than the food cost throughout 2 years span.
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- The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words Writing task 1 61
- The graph shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50721822143 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422222222222 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1740232311 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 3.83414634146 261% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188115133818 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115351295032 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393961699197 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100607969932 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519895899611 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.94 61.2550243902 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.