Some people believe that a year gap between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion.
There are some people who argue that students who have completed high school should take a year gap before enrolling in university because this will provide them with numerous opportunities and advantages. Others, on the other hand, believe that students must enroll in university right away. For various reasons, I believe that pupils do not require a year gap.
Primarily, it is often said that students who decide to take a year gap before going to college may be able to get work experience. Obviously, the student can apply his or her experiences when applying for a position as a professional employee at a specific institution. This is because most employers prefer people who have had a variety of jobs. Furthermore, they could use the year gap to travel, which would be an excellent opportunity for them to learn about different cultures and countries.
However, It cannot be denied that students may find it difficult to adapt to the lessons and themes presented in college at different levels. One of the main reasons for this is that students may forget what they learned in high school.
Besides that, students may be persuaded to drop out of college if they believe that the pay from their temporary jobs will be enough to support their financial needs. Some of my friends, for example, are drawn to non-skilled employment because of the greater pay, despite the fact that it means foregoing their schooling.
Finally, I believe that taking a year gap after graduating from high school should not be recommended because it may jeopardize the student's education. If all students complete their education, they are very likely to obtain better employment with greater salaries.
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- Some people believe that a year gap between school and university is a good idea while others disagree Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...commended because it may jeopardize the students education. If all students complete the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0640569395 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69307798609 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8466228864 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156368302351 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637731307811 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495456262705 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945270879333 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675779694751 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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