At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.
Nowadays, the number of young adults dominate the population in several countries than the elderly people, this phenomenon brings more advantages than the drawback which would outline in this essay.
To begin with, I believe a country which having more young people is beneficial. one of those is the development country since the large number of people with productive age. This is because, the young ones explore their environments and available materials, which may lead to amazing discovery that could change the world. For example, twenty-year-old Oxford University's student found an application that can be used to communication which now become a well-known application and almost everyone uses. He was trying to experiment with infrared and the idea of connecting people, in the same way, struck his mind.
However, there are disadvantage caused by booming population of youngest in a country. The one potentially danger is the low quality of jobs in a state due to the lack of experience for work. That is to say, if young ones are deficient in carrying out the basic chores, since they do not understand how done it. Moreover, they become lack of efficiency in doing things. For instance, many companies or factories prefer to employ experienced adults who know the job as the fact of inexperienced young could be detrimental to organization goals. Furthermore, senior citizens have more experience and understanding to solve a work than young adults in a nation.
In conclusion, having youngsters explore their environment and innovate things would be result more advantages in a nation.
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- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people do advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 67
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 67
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 78
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...having more young people is beneficial. one of those is the development country sin...
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Line 5, column 595, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'understanding solving'.
Suggestion: understanding solving
...enior citizens have more experience and understanding to solve a work than young adults in a nation. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, in the same way, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.265625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97892991484 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3420288278 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.692307692 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222764868616 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758489658318 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720289519313 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125880693429 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698505595218 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.