It is said that new parents should attend parenting courses to make sure how to know raise a kid successfully. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
In the modern world, there are many people think that new parents need parenting courses to learn how to raise their kids successfully. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion and in this essay, I am going to explain why I agree.
People who have a child for the first time have little knowledge about how to take care of them, educate them etc. Therefore, they need courses to learn to deal with that problem. When they take part in these courses, they will know what is good for their kids as well as what is bad for children. From that they will know how to expose their children to the world. They have knowledge about the nutrtion so they can raise their children effectively and make a kid eat well.
Moreover, in these courses, parents learn how to educate their children from young age and help them improve their basic skills like listening to music, playing with them. Parents will know which time is better for their kids to have meals, sleep. Finally, learning parenting courses help them know what to do when their babies cry, know when they hungry, want to sleep or feel bad about their body then parents can take their children to the hospital to make sure if they have any diseases.
In conclusion, because of the benefits that I indicate above, I think that new parents should paricipate in these courses to raise a kid correctly so that they can know how to grow another kid if they want and their children can have a good care to grow up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54887218045 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17167015922 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2259492705 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2717073159 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120287995858 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705665703092 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198541470398 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558156963678 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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