Education 11: In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school.
Do advantages of home education outweigh disadvantages?
Numerous parents who are willing to send their children to school. While this inclination brings drawbacks, I would contend that the advantages of homeschooling still eclipse disadvantages in the long run.
On the one hand, unwillingness to send students to schools brings significantly adverse effects. First and foremost, home-schooling deprives children of chances to interact with teamwork of class discussion with others. Such disadvantage has a negative impact on their future careers progress. The second worthy mentioning problem is that parents do not provide comprehensive knowledge. To elaborate, home- educated commonly do not have enough pedagogical skills and fail to cover intensive knowledge. Consequently, children form misconceptions and superficial understanding.
Notwithstanding mentioned drawbacks, I still opine that educating children at home brings certain benefits. To commence with, children could study at their own pace, which is the most suitable choice for students who are slow learners and fail to adapt to a fast-paced style of learning. As a result, they would achieve better academic performances by virtue of having adjusted their speed. Another noticeable benefit is that the school environment has insufficient safety for children. To be more specific, absent parents leads to bullying at school as using drugs, child abuse or teenage pregnancy. This is because children are so vulnerable and naive that they cannot distinguish right from wrong or ask for help in case of being endangered. Meanwhile, home-schooling ensures children's safety under parents’ supervision.
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- Education 11 In some countries there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school Do advantages of home education outweigh disadvantages 63
- Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, still, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85232067511 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21128371643 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68776371308 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4147355362 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301293581951 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936740560312 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670060137613 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199107228634 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203399893455 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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