You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you over the the weekend. You decide to write to him at the hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions of the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear John,
I was so shocked to hear that you had a bike accident and are currently in hospital. It was unfortunate that you could not participate in this weekend's cricket match. I know you’d love to hear about the updates on the match, so I'm going to give you all the details.
Although our team did not win the last round, you’d be surprised to hear that the winning team was ABC boys group, which won by 10 runs. Having hardly any proper batsmen, they were still able to win because their strong areas were bowling and fielding. It was too hot and humid that day, so everyone was sweating profusely. But the scrotching heat did not affect the excitement of the audience because the match was so interesting and attention-grabbing.
I think we could have won the game if you were present, as you are extremely good at batting as well as bowling. I shouldn’t say this, but I am happy to lose once in a while because this will give our team members motivation to work harder for the next game. We will have something to look forward to, isn't it?
I will pray for you to get well soon and hope to see you in the next match.
Best regards,
Am.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...hear about the updates on the match, so Im going to give you all the details. A...
^^
Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...will have something to look forward to, isnt it? I will pray for you to get well ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, well, while, as to, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41860465116 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47263443283 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623255813953 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.038077856 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195034587307 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719255963754 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608892732619 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130481880148 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471470949459 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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