Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As the world keeps developing, which gives us an international connection between different people working various types of jobs, it is important to have a convenient means of transport. Cheap air flights are one way to travel, but there have been opinions that differ as to whether it is better to reach different locations with airplanes or to stop using them because of the negative impacts they bring. In my point of view, the negative side has its own merits, but they cannot overweight the advantages.
On the one hand, there are many noticeable drawbacks of low-cost air travel. Firstly, the fumes of airplanes are toxic to our environment and our health because they are mostly made of carbon monoxide. Much research proved has shown that this chemical might cause dizziness, fainting or slow thought processes. Secondly, accidents caused by travel by aircraft might make some people afraid. There were 40 accidents involving commercial passenger planes in 2020, 5 of them resulting in 299 fatalities.
On the other hand, many people would abandon traditional modes of transportation because average travelers would have no other option but to travel by sea, which is more time-consuming than flying. For instance, if a company has an important meeting that is due in three days in a different country, they will likely choose to travel by air, as the time unit of measurement of traveling by boat might be by days. Besides, tourism can be highly developed as low-cost flights widen travel choices.
In conclusion, I think air flights have made traveling easier than ever, and banning this could cause more pain than its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ut there have been opinions that differ as to whether it is better to reach different locatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11439114391 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7652093611 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3778892132 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231552002786 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718457181802 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555172427809 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134511193632 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034486770894 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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