This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram illustrates the process of making tomato ketchup
There are 15 steps in total. Everything starts out with collecting tomatoes and culminates when products are being used .
At the beginning of the process, the farmer collect tomatoes and storage them before choose the good sort to use and eliminate the rest. After that, tomatoes which are chosen will be sent to the factory to produce. Afterwards, all the skin, seeds,.. are removed out of tomatoes before putting them into the container to crush it into liquid. The liquid after being seasoned with salt, sugar,vinegar, it is boiled and rested for 2 hours.
Following this, the sauce is poured into these bottles and labelled. These products's quality will be checked and control to minimize problem that can happen to the ketchup. Having experienced all the previous stages, supermarket will distribute these ketchup and customers consume it as food with hamburgers and fries
The process of making ketchup begins again
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... culminates when products are being used . At the beginning of the process, the f...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...produce. Afterwards, all the skin, seeds,.. are removed out of tomatoes before put...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...roduce. Afterwards, all the skin, seeds,.. are removed out of tomatoes before putt...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Are
...uce. Afterwards, all the skin, seeds,.. are removed out of tomatoes before putting ...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , vinegar
...id after being seasoned with salt, sugar,vinegar, it is boiled and rested for 2 hours. ...
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Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this ketchup' or 'these ketchups'?
Suggestion: this ketchup; these ketchups
...ous stages, supermarket will distribute these ketchup and customers consume it as food with h...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e process of making ketchup begins again
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22641509434 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54490145929 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647798742138 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9436772789 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1042792923 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041242335229 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269025191667 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683660747209 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302089171172 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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