You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In the present time, purchasing products on the internet is becoming increasingly attractive to people. In my view, I believe that shopping online has more benefits than drawbacks.
To be specific, Buying some things on the internet is similar to purchasing lottery tickets. In the other words, buyers may encounter frauds online if they do not search clearly for information about shops which they will carry out a transaction through the internet. Consequently, they will receive fake items for which they must pay a high price or do not get anything at all. Moreover, while shopping online, it is difficult to return or exchange anything because the person who delivers products to purchasers is not the seller. As a result, customers are in trouble to return or change products when they are dissatisfied with them.
On the other hand, one obvious reason shopping online has become more and more popular is that it saves time and is convenient. One clear example of this, people can buy everything from home, with a computer connected to the internet. Therefore, it is not necessary for them to go to stores which saves a lot of time in a day. Additionally, everything in the world is ordered simply through the internet. For instance, Vietnamese can easily order some products from China through a shopping app which makes shopping offline hard to conduct. Last but not least, shopping online gets a lot of vouchers so buyers can purchase their favorite things at a cheaper price.
In conclusion, people are more and more enjoyable shopping online. In personal, I total think that it has advantages that outweigh disadvantages
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- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Buying things on the Internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages Giv 82
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02573529412 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75665432326 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4364852974 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198419306051 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685531927091 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525928639876 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134330259248 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470514879831 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.