Is money the most important aspect of a job.
Some people would strongly say money is the most important aspect of a job. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this statement and the reasons are given below.
First of all, studies show that a suitable environment and atmosphere directly affects a person's productivity and general happiness. If people choose a job that is not connected to their passion, they will fall victim to depression and perform poorly at their jobs. Thus, without the passion which drives people to withstand difficulties, they will be more likely to break and experience sadness.
Secondly, a job that is picked just because of the finances will eventually become drudgery and trust me, that will be miserable. People will have no motivation to face difficulties and drawbacks in their mundane jobs, therefore, they will break easily and give up without any hesitation.
In conclusion, I ponder that there are things which are superior to money in a professional aspect and choosing a job just because it pays well, is not a good idea.
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- Some people think that you can not get a good education in a foreign country 88
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ll only bring detriment. In this essay, i will try to state my point of view with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03157894737 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8060085906 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668421052632 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8254430103 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.222222222 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163057702377 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611945453031 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050211137122 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780962737214 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475165856533 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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