You have just returned home after living with a family in an English-speaking country for six months. You now realise that you left a small bag of personal possessions in your room. Write to the family describing the things you left behind. Ask them to send those items to you. Offer to cover the cost.
Dear Jeena,
I hope you all in pink of your health. Though it has been only a few days, I am missing you guys a lot. Thanks for making my stay memorable.
As you are aware of my bad habit of forgetting things, when I reached at Delhi airport, I realized that I have forgotten my blue Gucci bag in the wardrobe of my room. Also, it's really important for me because it contains the certificates of the study I've completed there. Not only this, there are two books, which are not that urgently required.
Can you send the papers as soon as possible by courier? Just let me know about the postage charge, and those will be upon me. Besides this, one of my friends, Harman, is coming to India the next month, I'll ask him to collect the books from you.
Sorry for putting you guys in the trouble, and thanks once again for tolerating me.
With lots of love,
Pass
- Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem 73
- You have recently faced a problem at the airport An employee of the airport helped you with this matter Write a letter to the airport manager and say What the problem was How the person helped you Suggest the manager to praise this employee in some way 80
- Nowadays it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and another aspect of one s life such as leisure time with family members How important do you think is this balance What kind of people would find it hard to achieve 89
- Most Modern Families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents What is the reason for this What problems can this cause 73
- Write a letter to the cinema manager movie theatre about a jacket you have left behind after a film In your letter Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'guy'
Suggestion: guy
... been only a few days, I am missing you guys a lot. Thanks for making my stay memora...
^^^^
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... contains the certificates of the study Ive completed there. Not only this, there a...
^^^
Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...man, is coming to India the next month, Ill ask him to collect the books from you. ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37423312883 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19955548632 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717791411043 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0884138909 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8181818182 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225443790975 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778662689062 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545639689607 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136395071309 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028419368027 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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