Online shopping is significantly increasing What effect does this have people what are the demerits and what are the job opportunities

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Online shopping is significantly increasing. What effect does this have people, what are the demerits and what are the job opportunities?

In today’s contemporary world, public tends to make purchases online rather than physical shops. This change has an exceptional effect of people, since it makes their life more comfortable, but it can also be the cause of self isolation. However, increasing number of online shops provides new opportunities for employees.

To begin with, ordering goods from internet was originally made to make people’s life easier and more convenient. This innovative method makes shopping less time-consuming and requires less effort, since transactions can be made anywhere with Internet connection available. However, if nation can buy necessary things without leaving their houses in order to get to mall, they will go out even less than before. This is due to the fact that ordinary tasks, similar to buying groceries oblige people to communicate with others and without it society might become even more isolated and lonely. For example, when order groceries using delivery services, customer and the deliveryman do not even meet each other.

On the other hand, development of new spheres can open new work places and vacancies. Obviously, maintaining and managing the store, delivering the products and more requires qualified specialists. These types of businesses also have a strong need of web designers, programmers and PR managers, which are new professions created in recent years. For example, the number of web programmers and graphic designers has significantly risen when quarantine has occurred.

Taking everything into consideration, modern methods of placing orders via internet have an enormous impact on routine of community and everyday life by simplifying it and creating new job openings. Nevertheless, it also affects society’s average loneliness level by decreasing contact between people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 711, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eliveryman do not even meet each other. On the other hand, development of new sp...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "requires qualified" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'qualifiing' or 'to be qualified'.
Suggestion: qualifiing; to be qualified
...livering the products and more requires qualified specialists. These types of businesses ...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61090909091 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94031875486 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683636363636 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8568322967 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.214285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104339803662 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348438613851 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412597507046 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626664093184 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410395454416 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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