Nowadays most people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree of disagree?
Choosing university or vocational training is not an easy question to answer for current parents and students, which direction to choose when there is a high rate of unemployment and non-professional students. Although college is not the only path to success, I agree the path of knowledge university that brings more advantages.
University is a place to help you have a knowledge base, a basis to help you do your job in a scientific way, when you practice without knowledge, you will have problems. Moreover, many companies when recruiting they will need people with a university degree first than those with experience, which is a certificate to show each person's qualifications.
On the other hand, if job skills can help you get a job faster, you still have to continue to expand your career path with a university degree. Because when you have mastered the practice, the acquisition of knowledge will be easy, theory and practice go hand in hand to help you succeed. At university, they have many opportunities for career development when they have access to a wide range of knowledge and other skills. Therefore, university students are well-developed people in different aspects.
In conclusion, although vocational training comes with some benefits such as helping learners get jobs quickly, in my opinion compared to vocational training schools, university training is more feasible and reasonable because it helps students to become rich knowledge as well as complete holistic development
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.275 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07000497647 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1380382895 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159873435344 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721772850196 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033185861346 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976636477895 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193221657093 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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