Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe, that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by some that, caretakers are responsible to teach children to become good people in society. Whereas, others claimed that through the school authority is the best place to learn the good behaviour. However, in my opinion, school teachers are the better choice for the children to be a good member of a nation.
On the one hand, people who support the first statement often think parents have more power and liability towards their children. Along with that, home atmosphere is the better place to learn teach and imitate others how become a responsible and well behaving member of the community. For instance, children can copy their parents attitude towards the society from their early childhood. Such things would influence them to approach and behave others in public because parents are the first teacher of every child. In addition, they believe parents may place a major role to treat children in proper way than teachers due to the limitations of school organisation, legislation in children act and so on. Such as many school emphasis their limits in students approach rather than the academic level. Similarly, teachers could not get enough time to concentrate each children behaviour very often.
On the other hand opposes argue that, teacher or school authority has abandoned opportunities to teach students better form of behaviour, attitude, and strategies. School atmosphere is the apt place for learn social skills, social services and social problems. Such as pupils from different homes shows various style of behaviour. To cope with such situation in friendly, adjustable manner would make children to be a gentleman or women. Likewise, teachers would get more chances to mingle with all all kinds of students and they can motivate or correct their students in better way than parents.
To conclude, parents have a responsibility towards their children behaviour in society to the core. Nevertheless, in my perspective school authority could enhance the children attitude properly through various approaches and proposals than parents.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ldren to become good people in society. Whereas, others claimed that through the school...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to teach'
Suggestion: to teach
...atmosphere is the better place to learn teach and imitate others how become a respons...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: all
...s would get more chances to mingle with all all kinds of students and they can motivate...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3009118541 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67529008523 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522796352584 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5480505271 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.588235294 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265206903847 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905075019357 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642509566431 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182992647115 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1005768306 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ldren to become good people in society. Whereas, others claimed that through the school...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to teach'
Suggestion: to teach
...atmosphere is the better place to learn teach and imitate others how become a respons...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: all
...s would get more chances to mingle with all all kinds of students and they can motivate...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3009118541 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67529008523 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522796352584 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5480505271 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.588235294 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265206903847 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905075019357 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642509566431 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182992647115 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1005768306 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.