According to those in the travel business, the nature of the average 'holiday' is changing. Rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far-away place, people now want excitement on their holidays and are keen to participate in unusual and challenging activities.
People nowadays are more inclined to seek exhilarating activities for their vacations than they were in the past, according to professionals in the tourism sector. In my perspective, the trend of choosing adventure travel as a vacation activity has steadily supplanted the concept of leisure vacations.
To begin with, the prevalence of unconventional holidays can be traced to people's need to escape their daily hectic routines. Indeed, humans have to cope with enormous pressure on a daily basis as a result of their heavy working load, financial burden as well as complicated social relationships. In this case, getting their break filled with lots of challenges and distinctive journeys helps to relieve them of their load and recharge their energy.
Additionally, the growth of dangerous sports including mountain climbing, ocean diving, or paragliding has also boosted the number of adventure seekers. The fact that these activities are being recognized as innovative, healthy, and safe sports has prompted people to try them out in order to meet their mental and physical needs. These sorts of holidays are definitely more appealing to people compared to traditional yet boring vacations such as visiting a museum or sunbathing on the beach.
To conclude, even though conventional holidays may be enjoyable for some people, I am completely convinced that the aspiration to reduce daily stress, as well as the popularity of dangerous sports, will continue to make adventure travel a more attractive vacation option.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to adventure'
Suggestion: to adventure
...n my perspective, the trend of choosing adventure travel as a vacation activity has stead...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41596638655 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96492512861 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4624372108 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.222222222 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183179284988 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713288995843 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443226549586 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100629279122 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355517637177 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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