Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, hosting an international sports event is very popular in many countries, but not all people think that is good for the country. In this essay, I'll give some reasons for it.
On the one hand, hosting an international sports event gets some benefits for the country hosting. Firstly, it's help that country advertisement about travel, culture, people, etc for free. For instead, VietNam will be hosting Olympics in 2022, before it, a large of people all over the world are searching and discovering a country where hosting the biggest sports event. Because of this, some famous places like Ha Long Bay, Phong Nha cave, etc will have attractive and developments economy of the country. Secondly, hosting an international sports event is facilitate the development of sports in the country, and athletes have many opportunities to join and get high achievements from the biggest sports event.
On other hand, it makes the country lack a lot of money. Preparing for it is needs time, energy, money, and place, it's mean the country must use large power for that event. In a poorly developed country, hosting a big event make people's tax payment high than normal, and social life becomes lower than. Besides, while and after the event finish, the rubbish grows taller, and the government should pay to clean it.
In conclusion, hosting an international sports event is has advantages and disadvantages effects to the country where hosting. But in my opinion, the effects of its are more benefits or more disadvantages than is dependent on the way government does.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03461538462 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71389968114 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1757382794 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301259122294 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117924258175 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822055078892 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200794999538 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964823792367 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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