The pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people were born in these countries.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of birth of people living in Australia with different personalities while the table compares five distinct countries in terms of the places they live in Australia.
Overall, it can be obviously seen that Australia is the nation that people are mostly born. Moreover, the Chinese live mostly in cities.
In the first chart, the first thing to notice is that there is a great number of Australians at 73%, which is five times higher than that of others at approximately 14%. Additionally, the figure for UK residents accounts for 7%, which is at half of the other, compared to an extremely small percentage of New Zealand, China, Netherlands at 1%, 2%, 3%, respectively.
In the table, the amount of Netherlands and UK people living in rural areas is at 10% and 11%, which is two- folds lower than the figure for the New Zealand one, ranking first among the rate of living in the countryside. Chinese inhabitants tend to live in urban areas mostly at 99%, however, the Australians are fond of rural areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... of the places they live in Australia. Overall, it can be obviously seen that A...
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...therlands at 1%, 2%, 3%, respectively. In the table, the amount of Netherlands ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82222222222 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74264448397 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.33148474 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209385647765 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101441047085 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115494306475 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151568609734 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128721059678 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.