Young people enjoy life more than older people do
Enjoying life doesnot have any time and age constrains. Happiness is just the mental state of one's life. However, Personally I believe that life will be more fun, challenging and more joyful as we became older. Moreover, life become more elate when we understand deeper meaning of it. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following paragraph.
To begin with, Childhood happiness rely on trivial things like toys, chocolates etc but when we became older or became able to understand things then we know the actual worth of life depends on. My personal experience is a example of this, I enjoy things when i achieve something such as the goal that i set up in my life. I become more joyful when go with my friends on vacation and chilling there. In childhood days these things were impossible to imagine. For this reason, if i have to choose the life i would definitely love to have this life over childhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, i feel, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 1977.66487455 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 407.700716846 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63253012048 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50776844991 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 618.680645161 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4015700185 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172767968728 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726179429319 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05149401723 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152484238347 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455209329162 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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