TO UNDERSTAND THE MOST IMPORTANT CHARACTERSTICS OF A SOCIETY, ONE MUST STUDY ITS MAJOR CITIES.
The author asserts that cities reflects the most caharacter of socities so , in order to understand the characterisctics of a society it is enough to visit it major cities. Indeed major cities displays the lifestyle of overall classes , diverse culture , but to find the authentic characteristics we need to go the remote places ans study the situation there .
At first , cities does reflect the characteristics of the society. it comproises people from various parts of the countries. Mostly in small countries , visiting the major cities that give thorough idea of every type of people living there . As cities are the first places to get developed and adopt with new technlogies we might know the development status of the socities. The restaurants, the temples , the offices reflect about the eating habbit , working habbit and their cultural and traditional beleifs. cities consist of people of every status , they have diversed style of living , we can find doctors , engineers and we can see the celebrities and we can also see the beggars and marginalized people. Thus cities does reveal the perfunctory charcateristics.
Though cities reveal the latest trends in technology , professions , cities are the places that have been customized according to match with the current trend. if we want to see the true nature of the people , overall development of the nation , we would have to visit the marginalized places . The problems of people are greater there and the culture is richer there . only by visiting the villages we would be able to know the true nature of people there . The occupation adopted by the people , the unique culture that they hold and the hospitality they serve. even festivals are better celebrated by the people in rural areas.
Finally, it is the cities that belies the status of overall nation , visting only cities might give the false view of the people. As in cities people have every oppotunity, helath , education everything , but while in rural places , people are dying of some endemic. cities are always covered by media while the rural places are not even able to attract doctor in their place. The sterotypical problems that the women on the remote places holds different heartaching stories. For example, how the mensurating women are treated have different stories in cities and villages.
In conclusion , if one wants to know the true charcateristics of the society one should visit the remote vilaages and observe their status.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 50
- TPO21 Independent A D For success in a future job the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school 70
- TO UNDERSTAND THE MOST IMPORTANT CHARACTERSTICS OF A SOCIETY ONE MUST STUDY ITS MAJOR CITIES 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14713216958 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79764151276 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471321695761 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5955662604 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0952380952 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 7.80617977528 512% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168723906394 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521271194219 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602601668148 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116043635887 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715741766563 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.