It is widely believed that spending time on the Internet could separate people from social life. From my points of view, I strongly disagree with this statement for a number of reason, which will be highlighted in this essay.
The crucial cause for supporting this argument is that using the Internet develops human social skills by communicating with others through appealing online apps. For example, Facebook is used widely in all age groups and it allows users to keep in touch with relatives and friends regardless of geographical distance. The growths of such tools give inhabitants more oppoturnities to interact mutual.
Another ground that should be taken into consideration is that the online network plays a vital role in enhancing human knowledge. Keeping up with the lastest news make it easier for individual to express their personal comprehension about a certain aspect of daily communication. One example out of many is that citizens in Vietnam could update the relevant information of Covid-19 pandemic like a number of cases and deaths,vaccine.
From what has been discussed above, in conclusion, I once again reaffirm that the Internet brings many advantages to human life than isolates them from community because of boosting social skills and expanding knowledge as well.
It is widely believed that spending time on the Internet could separate people from social life. From my points of view, I strongly disagree with this statement for a number of reason, which will be highlighted in this essay.
The crucial cause for supporting this argument is that using the Internet develops human social skills by communicating with others through appealing online apps. For example, Facebook is used widely in all age groups and it allows users to keep in touch with relatives and friends regardless of geographical distance. The growths of such tools give inhabitants more oppoturnities to interact mutual.
Another ground that should be taken into consideration is that the online network plays a vital role in enhancing human knowledge. Keeping up with the lastest news make it easier for individual to express their personal comprehension about a certain aspect of daily communication. One example out of many is that citizens in Vietnam could update the relevant information of Covid-19 pandemic like a number of cases and deaths,vaccine.
From what has been discussed above, in conclusion, I once again reaffirm that the Internet brings many advantages to human life than isolates them from community because of boosting social skills and expanding knowledge as well.
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- It is widely believed that spending time on the Internet could separate people from social life From my points of view I strongly disagree with this statement for a number of reason which will be highlighted in this essay The crucial cause for supporting 56
- it is thought by many people that the Internet has caused people to become more isolated from society To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , vaccine
...ndemic like a number of cases and deaths,vaccine. From what has been discussed above, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31553398058 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85602372612 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684466019417 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8751136846 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522810946734 0.244688304435 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187988199495 0.084324248473 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.220175980277 0.0667982634062 330% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323536953985 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.343413507042 0.056905535591 603% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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