The chart below shows the changes in three different ares of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003-2021
The line graph depicts the changes of crimes like burglary, car theft and robbery in Manchester city center between 2003 and 2012.
In general, car theft and robbery had a flactuation rate while the rate of burglary decreased dramatically during the given period.
To begin with, car theft which started at about 2300 cases in 2003 dipped in to 2000 by the year of 2006.From 2009 these figures began experiencing a slight rises to near 2600 and 3000 cases in 2010 and 2012 respectively.Robbery remained relatively steady over the decade with insignificant upward trend in 2005(900) in contrast to beginning stage in 2003(600).
Moving to the burglary, it was the great noticeable number which began at around 3400 cases in 2003. After a one year the figure reached the highest point with 3800 causes among other two categories. However, the number of burglary case fell sharply to 1100 in 2008 and the next year it went up to around 1500 cases.Tnen it stayed relatively constant by the end of 2012.
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- The chart below shows the changes in three different ares of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003 2021 84
- The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city center from 2003 2012 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Robbery
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: Tnen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, in contrast, in general, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87058823529 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71313605749 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.425325769 43.030603864 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.23603664747 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877279980658 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468800519963 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718432784647 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652044299293 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805811813245 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.