Eco-Ceritified Essay
The article introduces the topic about the use of ecocertified wood products. More specifically, the author discusses about the reasons contributing to unwillingness of US companies to obtain eco-certification. The lecturer in the listening passage disagrees and believes that thus stated reasons are not true.
In the reading, the author begins by stating that, US citizens are subjected to exaggerated advertisement of products so they ecocertified products won't matter in their purchase. The lecturer, however disagrees with this viewpoint. He states that US consumers trust the claims done by an independent organization and it becomes an influential factor for their purchase.
The author claims that US citizens are cost minded consumers. As the cost of getting the ecocertification of product is passed onto the consumer and they are unlikely to buy those products. Again, the lecturer believes there are flaws in the writer's argument. The speakers points out that when the cost difference is marginal eco friendly consumers are more likely to purchase ecocertified products rather than cheap and uncertified products.
Another reason why the author holds his claim is because he states that the sales of these products are domestic and doesn't require to consider opinion of foreign consumer. The professor in the listening passage is doubtful that this is accurate. He suggests that the possibility of foreign companies with ecocertified products to invest in US market has increased so the US companies should be wary about competitive market in the near future.
To sum up, both the writer and professor hold conflicting views about this matter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e subjected to exaggerated advertisement of products so they ecocertified product...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cost of getting the ecocertification of product is passed onto the consumer and ...
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Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...ecturer believes there are flaws in the writers argument. The speakers points out that ...
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Line 4, column 275, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'point'.
Suggestion: point
...s in the writers argument. The speakers points out that when the cost difference is ma...
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Line 6, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ales of these products are domestic and doesnt require to consider opinion of foreign ...
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Line 6, column 133, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: considering
...roducts are domestic and doesnt require to consider opinion of foreign consumer. The profes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4496124031 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05129119916 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5428487345 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 7.06452816374 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0332029455871 0.272083759551 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0116305724876 0.0996497079465 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286917930313 0.0662205650399 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0195568537974 0.162205337803 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242867124939 0.0443174109184 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.2367328918 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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