Some argueThat fitness and strengest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in this course. But some believe that success realated to metal attitude. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in number of people believing that tremonderous success is achieved by fit and strong persons and groups. While, other oppose it by saying that achievement is related to metal ability. In my opinion, latter apprehension is more effective and powerful, but this essay shed the light on both voews in following paragraphs.
To commence with,there are deluge of arguments in favor of my stance.The most preponderant one is that clear focus on goal.To elaborate this,when a person have a strong focus on goal inhis mind,then none can prevent him from success. It cannot only contribute to success, but also tells about his mental attitude. Thanks to the wide of advantages metal ability offers,players can enhance the quality and productivity of his sucess. Needless to say,all these merits stand in good stead as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of aforementioned propositions is that it is only likely to help one excel and thrive in varied areas. Besides,sportsmen not onnly win the game just because of fitness and strongness ,but due to strong will power and clear focus which not only improve the game quality by providing clear path. For instance, the study results published by government of Australia in March 2017 and April 2018 clearly indicate that Australian players won the matches and game competitions because of mental ability. As the result, the are in favor of this view.
On the other hand,a section of society contradicts with above said view by providing some justifications. They pondered that fitness and strength play an instrumental role in greatest success of individuals. As ,they believe that not only mentally strong player win the game ,but he need physical strength also . Due to fitness and strongness the chances of success increase in this field. Hence, because of all these reasons they are not considering upper view accurate.
To conclude, having pondered above stated viewpoint ot is crystal clear that importance of metal ability matter more in success of individuals and teams rather than physical ability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23446327684 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88618459142 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.376350705 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221425763661 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067932902792 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487698175557 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119107222131 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541491771531 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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