Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
Give your opinions
The dramatic growth of takeaway businesses has led to a social split between those who benefit from pre-made food and those who reject it. Although some laud its convenience and relatively low cost, I lean toward the second view because of health and eating habit issues later.
First and foremost, there is no denying excessive consumption of fast food poses a serious threat to human health. foods such as fried chicken, hamburgers, and chips which are incredibly high in fat and salt, are responsible for ailments as obesity, high blood pressure, heart disease, and so on. Furthermore, even if I agree that funk food is not only affordable but also available, the cost and inconvenience of treating illnesses it causes in the future are far more significant. Namely, whilst fast food has positive effects in the short term, its long-lasting impacts are generally negative.
In addition, owing to advertising campaigns of fast-food chains, which deliberately attempt to attract children to eat their products as much as possible, shape youngsters' future unhealthy eating habits. In particular, Donald mcdonald, for example, is an adorable clown who is in bright clothes, his smile is a beacon to kids. mcdonald's not only enthralling children by providing many playgrounds, but also by frequently holding children's birthday parties. Having grown up eating in mcdonald's restaurants, people are likely to continue eating there throughout their lives.
In conclusion, despite the increasing popularity of fast food and its advantages, I believe that it is associated with detrimental health and long-term unwholesome eating habit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47058823529 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9264572864 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6452443126 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106943289875 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396245455048 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384375480595 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690522441402 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398396802277 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.