You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr Dev,
I am writing this letter to make a complaint about your hotel's accommodation in which I stayed last weekend.
My flight to New York was cancelled due to unpredicted snowfall and I decided to take shelter at your hotel. I was alloted the single room suite on the first floor at the extreme left end of the block. Since the weather was freezing, I switched on the heaters of the room. Unfortunately, it was not functioning because the thermostat was fused out. I tried to contact the help desk but the service staff was unavailable.
Later, I was hoping to solve this issue by placing towels and bedsheets in order to cover the vents and succeeded initially; but, after sometime the cloths went damp and the room temperature became even more chilly. Due to this, I did not sleep well the whole night and decided to check out early, next morning.
If I may suggest, please check on the heating and air conditioning systems of the rooms as they need regular service so that they function properly. When such small and basic necessities do not work , they can ruin your company's reputation.
I hope that you consider my suggestion and take the required action!
Your's sincerely
Davi Jones
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... function properly. When such small and basic necessities do not work , they can ruin your compan...
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Line 9, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... small and basic necessities do not work , they can ruin your companys reputation....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77725118483 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59699692384 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687203791469 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4178587481 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6363636364 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20267146345 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698080633784 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049631207718 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102422922457 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712470792941 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.