The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections in 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph describes the data about different groups of ages of the populations in two countries Yemen and Italy in 2000 and predicts change in 2050.
Overall, the increase in the elderly group and the decrease in the number of children are the same progressions in both Yemen and Italy.
Regarding the picture, at the beginning of the century, according to the population distribution of three groups of people, half of the residents were from 0 to 14 years old, followed by 46,3% one from 15 to 59 years old and the over 60s took only 3,6%. After five decades, the number of elderly and working forces will rise to 5.7% and 57.3% respectively, while in the children group who are under 14 years old will drop dramatically to 37%.
In Italy, nearly a quarter was over 60 years old, which took 24,1%, the younger took 14,3% while the largest population area was working forces, 61,6% in the year 2000. Changes anticipated in 2050 in all categories will witness the decrease of the youth and 15 to 59 years old group, down to 11,5% and 46,2% respectively. However, in the older one categories, the population is almost double than in the past.
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes 78
- Extreme sports such as skydiving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view 61
- In many countries a small number of people earn extremely high salary Some people believe that is good for the country but others think that governments should not allowed salaries above a certain level Discuss both these view and give your own opinion 73
- the graph below shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by bus, car or train between 1970 and 2030 73
- In the future buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one category', 'a category', or simply 'categories'?
Suggestion: one category; a category; categories
...,2% respectively. However, in the older one categories, the population is almost double than i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67821782178 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56655836501 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569306930693 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1917495383 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0849552435116 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484932732299 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582613888276 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718354473978 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687281184341 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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