Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation’s history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?
There is an argument that ancient structures should be kept for the nation's history or destroyed to make way for new ones so instead of having many buildings overpopulated , citizens will have more places to work and live . People raise questions about the significance of maintaining structures and should history stand in the way of progress. I believe that we should retain these old buildings.
In fact , protectin historical buildings is an important thing since they have historical value . Many buildings have become special at some moments in that country , therefore they should be preserved. But it is so hard to maintain that building . Some people still want to destroy old structures because nowaday , the population is growing so we will need more houses and offices for people to live and work . So to uphold it we will need more places to build apartments for people because it is compulsory . Then again, the planet we are living on is overloaded .
History shouldn’t stand in the way of progress. It also helps a lot of countries away from being ruined or making their economy better . For example, the Forbidden Palace which was built as luxury homes for the Chinese King in the past and now it is a famous place many people visit . Relying upon ancient structures, many countries are earning a large amount of money. Also, countries are becoming more famous day by day like Beijing, London and Paris . These countries have more than thousands of people who visit each year .
In conclusion, the maintenance of old houses protects our cultural heritage and does not stand in the way of advancing, but rather, it gives rise to ideas for modern advancement.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
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...ng ruined or making their economy better . For example, the Forbidden Palace which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore, as for, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9359430605 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66347506028 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2948716907 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390316208397 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113611559412 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078382535297 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221229266877 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11160527586 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.