bad situation can come suprisely every time every where such as an unsatis factory job or shortage of money . Some people believe the best way to slove is accept it . other argue that it is better to try and improve such stiuations . In my mind both these views will suitable depen on your life , your character , other,...
Bad stiutation that people do not want to see . But it is always arounds may be your house, your school. somepeople choose accept it because of financial crisis or other unfortanate events. For example according to who 35 percent people are not fullfilled with job they have and still accpect it . Opposite when the people who refused face to face with bad stiutation . They try to work hard to ward the betterment of theiir job . they always open new options and always trying . Face the dilemma of stiutation they don't scare or shy . Moverer , it is make them become confident,creative,flexiable abd catch the dreams . To wrap it up , it can be concluded that some people due to unfavorable conditions can not change anything and give up while people who don't want to leave their target don't use the bad stituations as an excuse to stay down and imstead use it as motivation in their life to change every thing and rise up
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tiutation that people do not want to see . But it is always arounds may be your ho...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Somepeople
...arounds may be your house, your school. somepeople choose accept it because of financial c...
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Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to accept'
Suggestion: to accept
...r house, your school. somepeople choose accept it because of financial crisis or other...
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Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...tanate events. For example according to who 35 percent people are not fullfilled w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... For example according to who 35 percent people are not fullfilled with job they ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... with job they have and still accpect it . Opposite when the people who refused fa...
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Suggestion: .
...refused face to face with bad stiutation . They try to work hard to ward the bette...
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Suggestion: .
...ard to ward the betterment of theiir job . they always open new options and always...
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Suggestion: They
... to ward the betterment of theiir job . they always open new options and always tryi...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lways open new options and always trying . Face the dilemma of stiutation they don...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...g . Face the dilemma of stiutation they dont scare or shy . Moverer , it is make the...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mma of stiutation they dont scare or shy . Moverer , it is make them become confid...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...utation they dont scare or shy . Moverer , it is make them become confident,creati...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , creative
...verer , it is make them become confident,creative,flexiable abd catch the dreams . To wra...
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Line 1, column 620, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...,creative,flexiable abd catch the dreams . To wrap it up , it can be concluded tha...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ble abd catch the dreams . To wrap it up , it can be concluded that some people du...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e anything and give up while people who dont want to leave their target dont use the...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ple who dont want to leave their target dont use the bad stituations as an excuse to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r life to change every thing and rise up
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00423193641 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635802469136 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 72.7972526954 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136759707103 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457849380546 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371975527186 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136759707103 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.