The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attractions in Britain in 1999 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attractions in Britain in 1999.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Simon31 on Tue, 01/11/2022 - 08:08

The pie chart illustrates the report of tourists who visited four attractive places in Britain in the year 1999.

0verall, in the main view maximum number of visitors, went to a theme park again, more than one-third of people visited museums and galleries. In the theme park, people visited Blackpool pleasure beach for the maximum proportion.

according to the pie chart, visitors went to a theme park for the maximum proportion which is 38%. however, for just 1% museums and galleries become the second attractive place. Then come historic houses and mountains which are 16% and lastly, we have wildlife park and zoos, here only 9% visitors visited in 1999.

among theme parks, Blackpool pleasure beach got the maximum number of tourists which is 47% then little fewer people visited 17% and pleasure land of Southport was visited by 16% of visitors. Chessington world of adventures and Legoland, Windsor these two places among theme parks got the least number of visitors and that is only 10% among theme parks.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, second, so, then, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10650887574 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40804412686 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.551333765 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159551192749 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087832041778 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103278330529 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14048366242 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123062071645 0.0819641961636 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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