Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve such problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Technology has been a much-discussed topic in the modern world. It is believed that advances in technology have exerted numerous negative effects on the fragile environment. Opinions are divided on whether simpler lives or cutting-edge technology should be the key to this issue. From my perspective, I believe that thanks to the availability of modern technologies, environment-related problems will be improved remarkably.
Admittedly, some people may argue that due to simpler lives, there will be fewer environmental problems. It is a fact that the pressing environmental issues came from the coverage of hazardous waste, especially solid wastes, which could pose a serious threat to citizens' life as well as nature. If people lessen the number of products they bought daily, they can limit the environment-related issues. However, such fewer purchases could bring about unwanted effects to both individuals and countries. Doubtless, it can put individuals, especially extended families, to great inconvenience since those scanty commodities cannot meet their basic needs such as food or clothes. Moreover, it could make significant losses for the economy as there might be various enterprises being bankrupted due to the lack of consumers
Besides, there is always a range of ways that the developments of technology can contribute to environmental protection better than living simpler does. Firstly, the development of degradable packaging such as paper could enable customers to buy their desired products without worrying about physical waste thrown into the environment. Similarly, alternative energy resources such as solar energy will have become even cheaper and more effective. If this kind of energy is adopted widely, it is possible for us to sustain our current lifestyles while reducing our carbon footprint.
In conclusion, while some people think that they should live simpler lives to prevent environmental issues, I would argue that these problems can be addressed more effectively by technological improvements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6862745098 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23201788298 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.295561143 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.285714286 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275004190612 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842226667277 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687556913169 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176826519377 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077137022092 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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