In most successful organisations, some people believe that communication between manager and workers is important, other people say that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?
There are widely divergent schools of thought regarding whether the verbal interaction between leader and staff is more crucial than other elements or not. While a multitude of people are convinced that manager-employees communication play the most essential role in facilitating the success of the company, I opine that such communication and other aspects have their own beneficial impacts.
On the one hand, the contact between leader and other staff is necessary, especially in large-scale organisations. Firstly, it helps make sure that all the employees fully understand the superior and vice versa. Therefore, the manager can supervise their process effectively and have intervention immediately when there are mistakes. Secondly, regular interaction between leader and junior employees bring about the harmony and friendly atmosphere at workplace. In this way, everyone can feel open to exchange their ideas and concentrate more, thereby enhancing the productivity and efficiency of work.
On the other hand, I personally contend that other aspects also affect the growth of organisation. First, the unity is always a fundamental features that every professional workplace need to have. The unity bring people from all positions together, make them work hard for the same purpose - a prosperous and weathy organisation. Futhermore, with a view to accomplishing good achievement, the company need to employ high-qualified staff members. Thus, the recuitment process is also an contributing factor.
In conclusion, I am of the belief that the contact between manager and other staff is integral. However, other elements are also the key to the development and success of cooporations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64705882353 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18305449804 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7521017285 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228598541879 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069597104845 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632466140548 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147606261812 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669833864068 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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