In order to get a job these days, many people do unpaid internships. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these internships?
Although some peoples believe that being a university graduate is the greatest way to secure a solid job, others believe that starting work after school is a superior option. There are advantages and disadvantages to these viewpoints, in my opinion.
On the one hand, many people look for work after school since it will allow them to receive practical experience in their chosen field and develop top soft skills such as time management, leadership, and adaptability. As a result, you'll get promoted and have a successful career. For example, not only has the job market become more competitive, but there are also an overwhelming amount of applications for a single company position. As a result, some people believe that mastering crucial soft skills and having relevant experience in that line of work can put one ahead of the game when applying for a job.
Some people, in contrast, believe that pursuing higher education after high school is more useful.
A university degree is a persuasive indication of the applicants' ability because acquiring a university certificate indicates the tenacity, enthusiasm, and devotion required to pursue a degree course for three or four years.
As a result, most employers will be more pleased by university graduates than by those with lower degrees, leading to university graduates not just having better job chances but also higher earnings.
To sum up, while perspectives differ, I believe that a successful job requires a relevant background, which can be obtained through tertiary education or work experience, depending on the type of employment and field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...ve practical experience in their chosen field and develop top soft skills such as tim...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...dership, and adaptability. As a result, youll get promoted and have a successful care...
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Line 6, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'applicants'' or 'applicant's'?
Suggestion: applicants'; applicant's
...egree is a persuasive indication of the applicants ability because acquiring a university ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, while, for example, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26356589147 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90728680517 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 106.607317073 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9461819277 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.8 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101643717628 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507663541387 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650281425731 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458719581345 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546676535664 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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