As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology is one of the greatest invention of mankind. It is the brain child of mankind. It is through his thought process that he has invented so many great things in the world. It is true that in today’s world people are relying more and more on technology for their daily work but it does not necessarily impede their power to think for themselves.
Because of so many different kinds of tools around one can save so much of time which will be helpful in doing so many other productive things. For instance, imagine a world without the global positioning system? It would be so time consuming to find roads and would always have to start of way in advance. Now going anywhere has become so much simpler thanks to this wonderful technology.
However things like credit cards; on one hand it has made it very easy for us to make purchases but it can also be dangerous because sometimes we might end up spending more than required. Nevertheless we don’t have to worry about carrying the exact change etc.
The power of internet has made the world so much global and communication is so much simpler now. But also if internet is misused example by children it can lead to a lot of uncalled for consequences.
Finally, all humans make mistakes and technology which is invented by mankind is bound to fail. Therefore we need to know that it is there in our lives to make things simpler for us but we should always have our back up.
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