Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns.
In your letter, you should say:
-where you live
-what the problem is
-what he should do
Dear Mr. Gupta,
I hope you are doing well. However, I am not so well because from your new tenants which have shifted last week at your house.
My apartment is in block 4, which is next door to your house in our colony. We had a peaceful surroundings for the past couple of years, but now it seems like a commercialized place rather than a residential society. I assume you have rented your flat to bachelors which normally is against the society rules.
The problem with your new tenants is that they play loud music all night and shouting like animals which disturbs not only the sleep of my family but also of the other neighbors. I informed them twice to maintain the serene surroundings of the neighborhood, but they do not listen. Despite of our actions, they have given threats to my family and other neighbors.
Since you know in all flats of our society, nobody allows a bachelor to give their house on rent. Still, you have given the house without discussing with the other locals. Therefore, I request you to please give them a warning to maintain a quite environment in the society during night time or else I have to complaint to the society president about the problem in the next meeting. I hope you do understand the concern and kindly take this thing on priority.
Thank you for your cooperation in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'surrounding'?
Suggestion: surrounding
... house in our colony. We had a peaceful surroundings for the past couple of years, but now i...
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Line 9, column 240, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('environment') instead of another adjective.
... please give them a warning to maintain a quite environment in the society during night time or els...
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Line 9, column 462, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and kindly take this thing on priority. Thank you for your cooperation in advanc...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70247933884 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53105835635 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5710084015 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2857142857 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211319325771 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799144294533 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480553133535 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127216470748 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361537598245 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.