In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?
In some countries, people highly own home ownership, but in others, renting one's accommodation from a property owner is perfectly normal and it is even more praise than buying a house. In my point of view, whether it is a positive or negative situation depends on many factors.
On the one hand, it can be seen that most young people now concentrated on earning money to buy their dwelling to take a freedom space. Additionally, purchasing a house of your own will not have to live with anyone, or be influenced by people around, and you do not have to worry about unexpected incidents like in apartments, especially in severely degraded apartments. Take one of the most luxurious condominiums in Ho Chi Minh City as an example, this incident happened in 2019, a sudden fire that occurred in the night claimed the lives of more than 100 people, but the main cause was a petrol leak from a resident's motorbike in the basement. Consequently, after this incident, 60% of the people living in the apartment said that they don not dare to live in it anymore.
On the other hand, living in an apartment has several benefits. To begin with, the cost to build a shelter is a significant concern for workers, especially the poor; while you can find apartments for rent at a much cheaper cost and suitable for your salary. For example, a monthly salary of 10 million, if you do not want to build a house, then find a house to rent for 2 million and you still have a large amount of money left over for future work, because if you do not have an amount of money before, it will be a long time before you have enough money to build your own house.
In conclusion, it is better to own a home can be a great thing if it is within your ability. However, it could turn into a negative situation when it is beyond your capability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... home ownership, but in others, renting ones accommodation from a property owner is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, still, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46846846847 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61204646795 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3323962372 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.272727273 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285261125468 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924335276234 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424285270808 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159480864974 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345073619766 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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