The table and chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount spent by the students per week while studying abroad in four countries

Essay topics:

The table and chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount spent by the students per week while studying abroad in four countries.

The first given chart provides a comparison of average weekly spending in three dimensions accommodation, tuition and living cost, while the second graph shows the total budget of overseas student study costs in 4 different countries.
In the overall perspective, it is evident that the budget of living cost in four countries mostly surpassed their counterparts. Moreover, it is ostensible that the expense of education in country A is the highest figure of all sections.
In detail, in nation A, international students spend an average of $430 per week on living expenditures, whereas in country B, they spend just $350. Country B, on the other hand, has a $60 higher weekly accommodation expense than country A, at $280. Tuition charges in both nations total more than $300 per week. The spending for the three categories in the other two nations is all under $300, with country D's accommodation being the cheapest at under $200 per week.
It is also worth mentioning that studying in nation A costs $875, which is $140 and $335 more expensive than studying in countries B and C. Oversea students learning in nation D, on the other hand, must pay a substantially lesser fee ($435) than students studying in the other three countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A cost' or simply 'costs'?
Suggestion: A cost; Costs
...orth mentioning that studying in nation A costs 75, which is 40 and 35 more expensive t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88405797101 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88344696107 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9990397703 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261164503476 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109736674612 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498443013807 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15076306222 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552137547002 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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