Television has the biggest impact on our life because it is the most popular way of getting information. Do you agree or disagree?
Television is one of the miracles of science. If has a great impact on all walks of life, as it is an easy tool of information. I agree that, television bring insurmountable changes in the day-to-day lives of people.
To begin with, as television is an audio visual media it has a great impact on it’s viewers. Latest information relating the fields of education and entertainment are available through television. Students can broaden their knowledge by watching documentaries and news updates. Channels like animal geographic and B.B.C are excellent tools to learn more and their academic perf...
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Great work. Tessy, would you
Great work.
Tessy, would you mind sharing how to reach excellent score in "Sentence-Sentence Coherence"?
Sentence: It enlighten them about the latest developments in every field.
Description: The fragment It enlighten them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace enlighten with verb, past tense
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.029 0.07
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 394 350
No. of Characters: 2014 1500
No. of Different Words: 222 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.455 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.112 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.838 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 119 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.76 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.556 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.249 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.444 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.029 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5