Many students state that it is possible to achieve a high IELTS score without being active in class or doing very littel extra practive in their free time

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Many students state that it is possible to achieve a high IELTS score without being active in class ,or doing very littel extra practive in their free time

Submitted by wiztlwj on Fri, 03/11/2022 - 09:59

Receiving , students keep in their mind that they have the ability to achieve a good band score in IELTS without interacting in the class or spending their leisure time practicing. It is the opinion of this writer that it is better for pupils to spend more time practicing and participating actively in the class.
It must be understood that the number of students fail to focus while studying is quite large . This is due to the fact that students are paying attention to work that aren’t related to the online class. Research shown in BaoThanhNien is a prime example , where almost 75% of investigated students confirm that they are hardly concentrate on classes . Thus , it can be seen that ielts period become unqualified and less effective .
Another point worth consideration is that students giving up doing extra exercise after class .This is because the unflexibilty in their imagination and laziness in activities of practicing sense of vocabulary . Consider the example of unflexibility ,there are still a great number of students who become confused while doing the Mock test.For instance , the hard working students has proven the good bands in test and that is why there was always the small percentage of people practiving regularly
Taking everything into account, it is important that students keep a good altitude while studying and unlimit the time they spend on practicing extra work. Hence,this essay has demonstrated clear points to support people should be made to participate more active during class time

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Receiving , students keep in their mind that they h...
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...shown in BaoThanhNien is a prime example , where almost 75% of investigated studen...
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Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'concentrated'.
Suggestion: concentrated
...d students confirm that they are hardly concentrate on classes . Thus , it can be seen that...
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Suggestion: ,
...are hardly concentrate on classes . Thus , it can be seen that ielts period become...
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...od become unqualified and less effective . Another point worth consideration is t...
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...come confused while doing the Mock test.For instance , the hard working students ha...
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...d while doing the Mock test.For instance , the hard working students has proven th...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...n the good bands in test and that is why there was always the small percentage of...
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Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... keep a good altitude while studying and unlimit the time they spend on practicin...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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...ey spend on practicing extra work. Hence,this essay has demonstrated clear points to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, still, thus, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16532258065 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78023759225 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.233895868 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302941889719 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118300154886 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624544420404 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180828572919 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512624932132 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Receiving , students keep in their mind that they h...
^^
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...l to focus while studying is quite large . This is due to the fact that students a...
^^
Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...shown in BaoThanhNien is a prime example , where almost 75% of investigated studen...
^^
Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'concentrated'.
Suggestion: concentrated
...d students confirm that they are hardly concentrate on classes . Thus , it can be seen that...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t they are hardly concentrate on classes . Thus , it can be seen that ielts period...
^^
Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...are hardly concentrate on classes . Thus , it can be seen that ielts period become...
^^
Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...od become unqualified and less effective . Another point worth consideration is t...
^^
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ving up doing extra exercise after class .This is because the unflexibilty in thei...
^^
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ng up doing extra exercise after class .This is because the unflexibilty in their im...
^^^^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...vities of practicing sense of vocabulary . Consider the example of unflexibility ,...
^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... . Consider the example of unflexibility ,there are still a great number of studen...
^^
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...come confused while doing the Mock test.For instance , the hard working students ha...
^^^
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d while doing the Mock test.For instance , the hard working students has proven th...
^^
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the good bands in test and that is why there was always the small percentage of...
^^
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... keep a good altitude while studying and unlimit the time they spend on practicin...
^^
Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...ey spend on practicing extra work. Hence,this essay has demonstrated clear points to ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, still, thus, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16532258065 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78023759225 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.233895868 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302941889719 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118300154886 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624544420404 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180828572919 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512624932132 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.