More manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which cause many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
In modern society, the rapid development of produced food and drink, especially fast food, and the heavy workload led to the increase of high-level sugary product consumption. Then, many health problems which result from over-consuming become more popular in some parts of the world. People suggest that we should make it more expensive to lessen consumption. In my opinion, I partly agree with this idea, and I believe that there are more measures to control this problem.
To reduce the number of people using sugary products, increasing the price is a useful method. If the cost of food which contains a high level of sugar is double or triple a standard meal, hardly people will pay for it. In addition, for a long time, when people are familiar with cutting off the sugary interesting foods and drinks, they will no longer desire and be attracted.
However, only people who face the financial issue worry about consuming less such that high-cost products, while numerous wealthy families are willing to pay for it. Therefore, the aforementioned solution seems not effective enough to reach the goal, and the combination of several measures should be taken into account. First of all, the effort of the government to advance citizens' awareness about the bad influences of using too many sugary products is extremely important. Besides, it would be better to encourage residents to do exercises every day at their home or attend the gym class in order to prevent serious diseases. Companies should be banned if manufacturing products that have the amount of sugar exceeds the permission standard.
In conclusion, the high cost of sugary foods and beverages can partly mitigate the consumption, while more strong methods should be combined to get a better result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...the effort of the government to advance citizens awareness about the bad influences of u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68788845601 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631034482759 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.310035052 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.769230769 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411744728774 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121588541624 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576457913958 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215550054057 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639557667466 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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