Bullying is a big problem in many schools.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Fast forward to the 22nd century, school bullying still remains a big problem in many schools. It was always an existing topic among young children up until today. The factors can vary for triggering maltreatment against each other. The essay will talk about the causes and possible solutions to be adopted by the schools for shaping the school for a better learning place.
The first reason could be race discrimination because the former president of the United States, Mr.Trump had promoted Caucasians' superiority, the nation divided by race even stronger than before in the last few decades. Furthermore, the color of skin was always a sensitive topic in the United States because the country's population was formed by immigrants. The equality of race had been adopted only in the last fifty years; the skin tone judgment will be an unavoidable dispute.
The second factor that could be affected by the environment under domestic violence directly took tolls on children, and the abuse cycle wheel circulates. The children who were brought up by cruel parents tend to commit horrible courses of action that are set to their minds as normal. Moreover, the release of rage is believed through another abuse assumed by the children raised under violence.
Poverty stands as the last reason for a bully. Most children raised in poverty have less confidence, which becomes an easy target for being bullied because of being compared at schools with other children, such as by uniforms, school stationaries, etc.
The school nowadays should implement solid few alternative solutions to stop the bullying. To encourage group activities to promote students’ interaction for better knowing each other regardless of race. Introducing psychological classes or sessions to focus on children’s mentality, especially to open up the kids who are from an abusive family and direct them for positiveness. Lastly, if schools establish uniform requirements, the school kids look will not stand out from each other. Thus, the school will become a peaceful and better learning place.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to place'
Suggestion: to place
...haping the school for a better learning place. The first reason could be race dis...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...school for a better learning place. The first reason could be race discriminati...
^^^
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Trump
...rmer president of the United States, Mr.Trump had promoted Caucasians superiority, th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., and the abuse cycle wheel circulates. The children who were brought up by cruel p...
^^^
Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s by uniforms, school stationaries, etc. The school nowadays should implement sol...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 549, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to place'
Suggestion: to place
...l become a peaceful and better learning place.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, so, still, thus, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29607250755 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7198857341 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619335347432 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3623300886 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.117647059 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118579270788 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416013679985 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435752767312 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697864009565 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061071054079 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to place'
Suggestion: to place
...haping the school for a better learning place. The first reason could be race dis...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...school for a better learning place. The first reason could be race discriminati...
^^^
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Trump
...rmer president of the United States, Mr.Trump had promoted Caucasians superiority, th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., and the abuse cycle wheel circulates. The children who were brought up by cruel p...
^^^
Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s by uniforms, school stationaries, etc. The school nowadays should implement sol...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 549, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to place'
Suggestion: to place
...l become a peaceful and better learning place.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, so, still, thus, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29607250755 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7198857341 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619335347432 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3623300886 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.117647059 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118579270788 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416013679985 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435752767312 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697864009565 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061071054079 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.