It is the best way to make road transport safer if vehicle drivers take the driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been argued that contemporary driving test for vehicle drivers every year is the best way to have a safe road. While I agree that driving test is an effective way to make transport safe, there are various other steps that are useful.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that driving test could improve drivers’ skills and their awareness of following the transportation rules. Drivers who want to pass the driving test have to learn driving lessons, including road regulations, special signs and how to act correctly in a sudden accident, which are helpful to make the road safer. However, the yearly test is too frequent to take and would be bothering.
On the other hand, there are a variety of other methods can be used to improve the safety of road transport. Firstly, traffic penalties, such as small fines, license suspension and even imprisonment can act as a deterrent to drivers, prohibiting them from obeying the traffic rules. Secondly, it is also a great way to add some safeguard equipments in the road. For example, speed cameras and road bend deter people not driving too fast, while speed bumps and traffic signs can be added as warnings. What is more, governments can invest in better public transport systems so that more people will choose public transportation to go to work rather than driving themselves, which in return decrease the rate of traffic accidents.
In conclusion, while taking driving tests each year is helpful to make road transport safer, other effective ways can also achieve this goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
... to pass the driving test have to learn driving lessons, including road regulations, sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93846153846 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58768133172 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.684870997 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.727272727 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389411411018 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150757776333 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106082819037 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277509475498 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101659484662 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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