It is said that a university degree is more important than job satisfaction. Discuss both view and give your opinion
It is undeniable that thanks to university degrees a large number of students can easily secure a high-paid job. On the contrary experience and soft skills appear to be more virtual for the rest to achieve the same consequences. From my perspective, I believe that having a university education is essential for academic jobs while soft skills and experience are more useful in business.
On the one hand, being a university graduate is considered to be the key to opening a smooth cancer path. Some main reason leading for this is that some types of occupations are required to have high academic theory level to advance the news products. In other words, food creators have to acquire an enormous knowledge background to make sure that outstanding recipes are created regularly as well as have abilities to give some alerts to people who are not appropriate to assume it. That is why it is more important to get tertiary education to have a good position in each people’ career
On the other hand, besides education degrees owing good soft skills and relevant experience background is a huge privilege to make applicants' personal files more brilliant. With a huge number of job files, it is often thought that having those new employees can be valuable to a company and can put one ahead of the game when applying for a position. By means of illustration, for some specific positions such as salesman or marketing they can immediately bring benefits to the company without the need for any further training.
In conclusion, getting a good job requires a relevant background either experience or education depending on the type of work and field. People should make sure they attain the necessary skills or degrees before applying for a job in order to be sure of success.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...iable that thanks to university degrees a large number of students can easily secure a high-paid ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 592, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a good position in each people’ career On the other hand, besides education deg...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 965.302439024 153% => OK
No of words: 302.0 196.424390244 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90066225166 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7692514446 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 106.607317073 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 283.868780488 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2481365083 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.545454545 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0735606237368 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309095048414 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272113595161 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503019221854 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020391550303 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...iable that thanks to university degrees a large number of students can easily secure a high-paid ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 592, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a good position in each people’ career On the other hand, besides education deg...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 965.302439024 153% => OK
No of words: 302.0 196.424390244 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90066225166 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7692514446 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 106.607317073 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 283.868780488 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2481365083 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.545454545 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0735606237368 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309095048414 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272113595161 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503019221854 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020391550303 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.