The bar chart compares the proportions of Australians in both genders and various age groups who exercised regularly in 2010.
The bar graphs indicate the percentages of Australians each sex in various age group who did regular physical activity in 2010
Overall, it is clear that the number of women doing exercise was higher than that of men in all age groups. Also noticeable was that the activity figures for women had an upward trend, while the figures for men dropped notably.
Looking at the bar graph more closely, one can see that nearly 52.8 percent of 15 to 24 age group men were in physical activity, which makes them the group with the highest rate of women for the period. However, the percentage of men in activity dropped sharply to 39.5% in the 35 to 44. After that, it fluctuated slightly over the period and stayed at 46.7 in the last group of 65 and over.
On the contrary, it begins with the second rank for women in share of 15 to 24 ages but the rate shoots up considerably from 47.7% to highest point of 53.3 % in share of 45 to 54 ages. Nevertheless, the gap went down minimally at 47.1 percent at the end of share.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tages of Australians each sex in various age group who did regular physical activ...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...her than that of men in all age groups. Also noticeable was that the activity figure...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the highest'.
Suggestion: to the highest
... rate shoots up considerably from 47.7% to highest point of 53.3 % in share of 45 to 54 ag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, nevertheless, second, so, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38624338624 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3299150532 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597883597884 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1739123803 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173428426561 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709555318938 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110222500515 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131383025255 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139006021503 0.0819641961636 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.