Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. However, others believe that is becoming easier. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In many countries, residing in metro cities has become a noticeable trend. However, some people hold the opinion that living in big cities is becoming more difficult; whereas other have the conflicting views. Here, in this below essay, I will try to enunciate this fact with my own perception.
To begin with, it is noteworthy that there are few reasons why people think the life in big cities is harder than rural area. Firstly, in their opinion professional skill involved job is a crucial requirement in this working environment. Furthermore, labor forces from inside and outside country area are mainly poured in city that has a developed economy. Therefore, it is easy to understand the fact that working in big cities is competitive and highly be eliminated if cannot meets the standard quality enacted by company. Probably, those things above are the reason why people trust that living in huge cities is hard.
As per them, if one cannot bare challenges from fierce competition that is requested from big cities. Probably, they will face several difficulties about the self-advancing and could be missed many profits from its. Advanced medical infrastructure is an one big plus point for living in big cities. In big cites, calling an ambulance is much easier and faster than developing area. Furthermore, there are many conveniences such as security, which are able to protect citizens from criminal much prominently, or high salary. For example, high salary incomes from big cities are enough to raise a family with almost full of convenient, which is hard to reach when it comes to the underdeveloped area.
In conclusion, by looking the above fact, surely with me the latter statement has won the race. For my part, the former has its own advantages and detrimental effects, but it seems like it has more negative than positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...its. Advanced medical infrastructure is an one big plus point for living in big ci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01960784314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75111385642 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8649874415 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203496678039 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676553379332 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093596196629 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125514797126 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989555354889 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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