men and women do inherent differeny physics. Thus they are made for different tasks.
As per the argument, men and women do inherent differeny physics. These differences can result in different task orientation that they may prefer. But saying they are not equally suited for many tasks as a generalized statement is a bit overstepping the line. Biologically, men and women have different physical builds and structures. While most men are muscular built with more strength, women are built around more critical care and analysis based view points. Though these differences can result in them working in certain fields, it is finally the will of an individual that results in their actions.
In a more generalized society, this view is ingrained into the cultures. This can be because of since histrorical developments of civilisations, women were considered to be more femine and constrained to home-farm works and raising the children, while men were involved into wars, hunting. From ancient times of Mesopotamians to Egyptians to Indus Valley, records have been found supporting the claim.
With passage of time, this notion has been broken again and again. With the famous Rani Lashmibai, Queen of Jhasi, who bravely fought againts the British Rule in India in the 19th centuries to the women to 21st century the Phagot sisters from India, have made the nation proud with their winnings at Olympics and other international events of wrestling. On contrary, to the Phagot sisters having developed more on their physical strenghts, Susmita Sen, actress and model, was the first Indian to be crowned Miss Universe, which is concerned with more analytics and manners.Similarly, in cases oncerning men, we have Muhammed Ali - renowned wrestler, to Mr.Vishwanathan, world Chess Champions.
Today, the world is more open to view men and women as the same, with adaptable differences. The long sought tasks considered to be feminine like of a cook, farmer, bringing up children are now taken up by men equally. With the modernised world, women and men are encouraged to take up tasks that can help the community grow together.
But still with all the equalities in different professions, there is still significant difference in the percentage participations of different genders. Still it can be considered that the long sought view about gender based roles are ingrained into modern society.
Still we see, men being the largest percentage gender serving in the army, figting wars, men being in the largest percentages in major municipal cleaning up activities of sewages, men still being majorly occupying positions of critical decision making at different organizations as well as the world forums. Women still being in the largest percentages as nannies, the concept of housewife is popular while the concept of house-husband is unheard of. Women majorly work in occupations of care- nurses, doctors, househelp, teachers.
In the modern world, this argument is challenged day bu day and also accepted by many as an inherent characteristics based division. On one hand, the world promotes International Womens Day to accept and encourage women activity in male dominated fields like engineering, many parts of the world still consider women and men not suited for many tasks based on their physical differences. Thus the argument finds itself to be true to some communities while false to many other.
A better view that should be encourage should be built around the will and interest of an individual to work rather than being dependent on their physical or gender differences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, similarly, so, still, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2944.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 561.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24777183601 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89743319326 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 909.0 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4675559329 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298310455079 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874538225245 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866901949342 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123980616461 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107044893378 0.0667264976115 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 100.480337079 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.