It is better to have a mentor to advise you in your career than to rely entirely on yourself.
A person's career is more of an amalgamation of what he wants, what interests him and what he expect for himself. A mentor or any other person can only help to a certain extend.
The final choice is always with us. At the end, we are the only one who can understand ourselves better.
I believe self-analysis and finding out the career choices by ourselves works better than any other options.
I hold this opinion because of the below two reasons:
First, if I have to rely only on myself to make any decision, then I will take the responsibility of the task. I will take full ownership, will do my background researches, explore my options, try to find out what fits best with me. I will also try to envision myself with those options. During the entire research, I will have a better understanding of myself and my choices. this understanding ultimately will help me to make the decision. I will have more faith in that decision, hence, more probability of right decision. I remember consulting my mentor while choosing my major in high school. Due to my interest in anatomy, he suggested Biology. I opted to research my options myself and explore many fields of studies. finally, I ended up selecting mathematics as I have a keen interest and acumen in statistics and logical reasoning, which ultimately helped me in finding out my area of interest in computer science and programming.
The second reason for holding this opinion is mentor tends to suggest courses that are widely known, and pay good. they hold so much of experience that they sometimes tend to be more petronizing about the decision they think is best. it is possible that the carrer choice they suggest is best but it is also possible that we do not hold any interest in that. it is also possible that it is not something that we see ourselves in, eventhough we have the interest. I have seen cases where we tend to believe in their judgement and does not listen to our inner voices. I remember selecting machine learning over cloud computing in my final year elective subject because my mentor suggest that machine learning is at boom and I can learn cloud afterwards. Later on, I regretted my decision as I found out that my interest is more inclined towards cloud technologies and I selected a cloud based project as my major capstone project.
it is always helpful to have an expert opinion. but, replying on yourself, digging through the things by yourself helps you to understand yourself, your choices. Eventually, this understanding turns into better decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'expects'.
Suggestion: expects
...e wants, what interests him and what he expect for himself. A mentor or any other pers...
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Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...other person can only help to a certain extend. The final choice is always with us. A...
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Suggestion: This
...understanding of myself and my choices. this understanding ultimately will help me t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81900452489 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73305414872 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502262443439 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4547863266 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.68 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168541593512 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457177368462 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552535359738 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834017747193 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694980110951 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.