People who take decisions based on emotions and give logical explanation later on are poor decision makers. Agree or disagree?
Generally, people who make decisions based on emotion and comes up with the logic behind that are considered poor decision makers. Surely, i agree to that because of following reasons:
Firstly, whenever a person going through a typical kind emotion certainly tend to make a decision based on his current mindset. let's take a emotion "anger", a person named ravi is in very angry mood right now because his boss scolded him his team's mistake infront of all office colleagues since, ravi is a team leader he has to take the responsibility either it is a appreciation or esclation. So, ravi immediately dropped his papers and put his resignation letter infront of HR immediately after that incident. it is not wise to do this without having other job offer in hand. When asked, ravi response is his self respect is more important than the job. if we observe here ravi can be considered as poor decision maker as he took the big step without even thinking once. few concerns here is, what if he wont find job immediately few months without salary he has to live until he find the job and now a days finding a employment is difficult due to increase in population, limitation of job market, no proper skill set. All these factors can hurt him badly. he would have done the otherway instead of giving resignation. he can prove his skills and make his team in right track , making them working and making them accountable to the task they do. By this way he could get appreciations from higher authorities and may receive special awards and recognition infront of his office colleagues where he got humiliated once. A good decision maker quality is to turn the bad situation in favor of him and shall consider that as opportunity to get high recognition.
my Second reason, emotionally influenced decisions may let you in trouble here is why; let's take a example of extreme happiness, surya's son got state first in his secondary education. surya is overwhelmed by happiness that his son not only good grades but state first. he throwed a bigparty to all relatives and friends which put a figure around 3 to 4 lakhs despite he belong to middle class and he utilized all his savings for this which is absolutely not necessary instead he could have used that money to buy his son a brand computer or may be it can be useful in his son's further education. surya might give a answer like: it's my son's achievement how can i not celebrate it. Moreover, money i will earn it again. it seems illogical because earning again is secondary but huge amount spending to party is really waste. he could have a given a small size party in my opinion even that is not required seeing his financial condition.
Sometimes emotion based decisions might work like you got emotionally touched by seeing a beggar and you gave him some money and shirt to wear. Though some of them work i strongly recommend thinking before taking any action is necessary just not going blindly by whatever emotion you are in right now. I suggest to all whenever an emotion hits and you are about to take some action because of that emotion then just sit and take a breathe , count 5 to 1 . this helps in analyzing whether the decision /action you are about to take is proper or not and this will make you a good decision maker.
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- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the pos 50
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the pos 50
- People who take decisions based on emotions and give logical explanation later on are poor decision makers Agree or disagree 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mediately after that incident. it is not wise to do this without having other job...
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... without salary he has to live until he find the job and now a days finding a employ...
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...e has to live until he find the job and now a days finding a employment is difficult due t...
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... skills and make his team in right track , making them working and making them acc...
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...opportunity to get high recognition. my Second reason, emotionally influenced d...
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...n not only good grades but state first. he throwed a bigparty to all relatives and...
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...a figure around 3 to 4 lakhs despite he belong to middle class and he utilized all his...
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...oney to buy his son a brand computer or may be it can be useful in his sons further ed...
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...her education. surya might give a answer like: its my sons achievement how can i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, then, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 33.0505617978 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2711.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 584.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64212328767 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61522176014 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 215.323595506 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 879.3 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4547089636 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.958333333 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209005621666 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643954661199 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926932277375 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184084665917 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132102341412 0.0667264976115 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...onsidered poor decision makers. Surely, i agree to that because of following reas...
^
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee to that because of following reasons: Firstly, whenever a person going through...
^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lets
... decision based on his current mindset. lets take a emotion 'anger', a per...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... decision based on his current mindset. lets take a emotion 'anger', a per...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...based on his current mindset. lets take a emotion 'anger', a person nam...
^
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...to take the responsibility either it is a appreciation or esclation. So, ravi imm...
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... of HR immediately after that incident. it is not wise to do this without having ...
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Suggestion:
...mediately after that incident. it is not wise to do this without having other job...
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Suggestion: If
...respect is more important than the job. if we observe here ravi can be considered ...
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Line 2, column 785, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Few
...he big step without even thinking once. few concerns here is, what if he wont find ...
^^^
Line 2, column 894, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
... without salary he has to live until he find the job and now a days finding a employ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 911, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...e has to live until he find the job and now a days finding a employment is difficult due t...
^^^^^^^^^^
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... he find the job and now a days finding a employment is difficult due to increase...
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Suggestion: He
.... All these factors can hurt him badly. he would have done the otherway instead of...
^^
Line 2, column 1135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...otherway instead of giving resignation. he can prove his skills and make his team ...
^^
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... skills and make his team in right track , making them working and making them acc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...opportunity to get high recognition. my Second reason, emotionally influenced d...
^^
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t you in trouble here is why; lets take a example of extreme happiness, suryas so...
^
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Surya
...state first in his secondary education. surya is overwhelmed by happiness that his so...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...n not only good grades but state first. he throwed a bigparty to all relatives and...
^^
Line 4, column 371, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'belongs'.
Suggestion: belongs
...a figure around 3 to 4 lakhs despite he belong to middle class and he utilized all his...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 542, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...oney to buy his son a brand computer or may be it can be useful in his sons further ed...
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Suggestion: Surya
...e useful in his sons further education. surya might give a answer like: its my sons...
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...ons further education. surya might give a answer like: its my sons achievement ...
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...her education. surya might give a answer like: its my sons achievement how can i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cation. surya might give a answer like: its my sons achievement how can i not ce...
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Line 4, column 631, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
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...tion. surya might give a answer like: its my sons achievement how can i not celeb...
^^^
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...can i not celebrate it. Moreover, money i will earn it again. it seems illogical ...
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.... Moreover, money i will earn it again. it seems illogical because earning again i...
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...ount spending to party is really waste. he could have a given a small size party i...
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... of that emotion then just sit and take a breathe , count 5 to 1 . this helps in analyz...
^^^^^^^^^
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...emotion then just sit and take a breathe , count 5 to 1 . this helps in analyzin...
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...st sit and take a breathe , count 5 to 1 . this helps in analyzing whether the de...
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... sit and take a breathe , count 5 to 1 . this helps in analyzing whether the dec...
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...t and take a breathe , count 5 to 1 . this helps in analyzing whether the decision...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, then, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 33.0505617978 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2711.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 584.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64212328767 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61522176014 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 215.323595506 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 879.3 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4547089636 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.958333333 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209005621666 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643954661199 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926932277375 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184084665917 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132102341412 0.0667264976115 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.