Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There has been a colossal upsurge in discussing whether physical or mental strength plays a crucial role once partaking in sport. Both elements have their own benefit and are astonishingly essential for sports players. While I give a green light to a former statement, two sides of this debate will be analyzed in this essay before my rational conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, physical health has a significant impact on the players. Firstly, when we are joining sports, it is hard for us to avoid some cuts and scraps when competing with our rival team. That's a reason why a major number of sports require the fitness and stamina of participants. Secondly, playing sport help people to keep supple and limber so we need physical strength to get used to the modification in our body. Thirdly, without physical strength, it's difficult for us to participate in sports such as football, basketball, etc for a long time, and we hardly defeat our opponents. For instance, if physical power brings us to get out of our comfort zone and extremely immerse ourselves once playing. This can help us experience different types of sports and be better off for our health.
On the other hand, not only physical strength can make us gain achievement in exercising sports but also need mental strength. To be clear, mental strength forces us to get over a losing game. We can take it as a lesson to earn from a loss and keep practicing to make us better on the following day. Moreover, mental strength combined with physical power can accelerate the recovery period from injuries. Furthermore, the aim of playing sports is to bring happiness and fitness to our lives. Thanks to mental health, the players not seen winning is everything and fairly partake in a competition. Without mental strength, we hardly accept that we need to practice more and more in order to be better and avoid being egoistic about our ability. Finally, all of these factors can help us know the joyful and true meaning of sports' role in our daily life.
In conclusion,I personally believe that sometimes physical stamina is more crucial than others. However, physical and mental strength is substantially beneficial for a player once partaking in sports. Although these advantages, both physical and mental strength can't be perfect if not corporate with the others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93417721519 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68344399144 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541772151899 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9713668228 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8095238095 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8095238095 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.19047619048 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264797414629 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836295073336 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566154532858 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174156600582 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015281732593 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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