The diagram illustrates how brick is manufacture

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The diagram illustrates how brick is manufacture.

The backdrop of this process diagram depicts the manufacturing of brick.
It can be seen that, the process how bricks are manufactured is a multi step linear process which start with digging clay and ending up with delivery to the consumer of it.

Let us commence with the first stage, at the beginning the clay are dug by a digger. Then it shifted into a roller where the metalic ingredients removed from the clay. Next, sand are mixed with water until they became a mixture and after that the mixture shifted to a mould and cut down into pieces as their measured size.
In stage two, the bricks are gone to the drying oven and pass almost 24hrs to 48hrs. After drying the brick in a oven they became ready for burning. They were sent to a kiln where they burn in two specific temperature. When it burned properly the brick are cool down into a cooling chamber for two or three days. Then it packed bu worker and delivered to exact destination of it

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...digging clay and ending up with delivery to the consumer of it. Let us commenc...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hrs to 48hrs. After drying the brick in a oven they became ready for burning. Th...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46285714286 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26343426984 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622857142857 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1896394014 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184916086236 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726644815573 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104044905035 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147226543546 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12729631482 0.0819641961636 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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